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Woodwork is a brief tale that I came up with as a writing exercise in 'flash fiction' i.e. write it straight through with minimal editing. I've tidied it up a bit more since finishing, cleaning up the sentences that stood out as clunkers to me. Click the links below to take a look:

Interesting theme you've got

Interesting theme you've got going - women (heartbreak), paper and wood. I think this was much better than Paper Chase. It was a little hard to care about you and Alfie, but "Mr Brooks" sucked me in right away. Then scared the hell out of me. Nice work!

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